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Cosmoggies

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more pews!!
gosh these are so fun to draw!

oh yes, sorry about the inactivity ovo;!!

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Awah, so cute! Look at all the Neb Nebs! I really love how each one seems to have its own personality, it's written all over their faces.

The painting-like coloring you did does a huge service to the image. Cosmog is a little gas floof, and it catches the mystical quality they would probably have. Using the same color in the background as on the Nebby's really emphasizes how they're all out representing outer space, yet no part of them blends into the background-it's nicely staggered. The way their arms (?) are positioned really catches the bounciness of a Nebby. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

I can't get over how cute their expressions are!

Now, the less impressive-the composition isn't groundbreaking. It feels like if we panned the camera out a little, they'd have this weird and awkward vertical squash going on. The top right Cosmog is slightly baffling to me: the top left is holding the smiley Cosmog, and it looks like the top right is floating away, but the top right looks kind of like it's behind the 'listening' Cosmog beneath it. The space is, ironically, unclear.

I think writing "Cosmog" in the bottom left corner is superfluous and slightly distracting. It's not "inside" the image enough to be part of the composition, but it's too noticeable to ignore. Maybe make it more like your signature?

But I really like this... Excellent work!